Vocals Track
Breathing- he had a good breath at the beginning but then an awkward one right after the first line, its just like super loud and it doesn't have to be
Headphone bleed (?)- if you put his vocal track on solo you can still hear every other track as well.
The last long note he sings is really out of tune
Bass Track
Little bit of a fumble at measure 11 but is quickly recovered
Same at 27
Tempo is always inconsistent but thats the same for all tracks
Keyboard Track
Transition from measure 15 to measure 16 does not flow
Doesn't sound like consistent playing, more like different keys tracks stitched together. Transitions need to sound more natural so it sounds like all one track.
Snare Track
Some beats are just a tiny bit off, could use work to make them all the same volume and duration to make it absolutely perfect.
Kick Drum
About same as snare
Cymbal Track
There's like a weird buzzing sound after every hit but idk what it is, I feel like it could just be me but I've also never heard it before